About the competition

In conjunction with the exhibition Love, Loss & Intimacy the NGV invites you to create your own piece of writing exploring notions of love, loss or intimacy, under 500 words. If you're over 18 years of age and a Victorian resident, post your entry on the blog (1 entry per person) for the chance to win a romantic weekend getaway for two at Sofitel Melbourne On Collins and lunch for two at Persimmon.

The judging panel is comprised of three judges: Professor Jennifer Strauss (Editor of the Oxford Anthology of Australian Love Poetry), Penny Modra (Editor of Three Thousand; The Age arts columnist) and Richard Watts (Presenter of SmartArts on TripleR).

Entries accepted until 11 July 2010 and the winner of the competition will be announced and their entry recited on 18 July following on from the 2pm Floor Talk.



Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Said Hello to the Clouds

I spoke to the clouds today
up there in the rarefied air
They weren't very good listeners
flitting by in their cloudy way
but since clouds are born gossips
I had no lack of conversation

I told them about you
how you put butterflies in my tummy
with a word or a glance
& how your smile is so brilliant
it's the eighth wonder of my world

They said- "Oh yes, we know your beloved, she visits from time to time & we dance in the currents of her eyes."

They said your eyes were sapphires
the colour of ozone & the ocean
shifting from bright azure
to grey goodbye
startling even to such as them

They told me of rivers & lakes
that sparkled in the motes
of the westering sun
yet nothing could hold a candle
to the magnificence of your smile

Then they told me of dreams
when you were off away with them
from fantastic surmise
to nightmare cries
& sleepwalking until sunrise

The clouds carried me across
the Great Divide in the jet stream
spoke to me of hunger & drought
fire & flood & famine
& showed me wastelands of regret

They said- "You crossed this way before
but you lost your way."
Then they told me to follow my dreams
trust to my instincts
& to never lose heart

The clouds spoke to me today
& they said to say hi
drop by when your eyes are clear
your smile is near
& your heart is in want of nothing

Thomfool

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